Three plotlines this time;
Eddie bumps into someone from his past. Who he doesn't want to see again. This person is dangerous.
Two; Mitch has an upcoming test. He's stressed out about it.
Three: Trevor dates the boss's daughter. Which leads to him learning a lesson.
Eddie once again thinks if he tells nobody anything a problem will go away. And again he gets no sympathy as a character from me. This goes to a set piece resolution and as a plotline is ok.
The Mitch one does have quite a good pay off. Which may make you smile.
The Trevor one is really good. Solid drama that you can learn from. You do want him to say 'see Jill? That's what it's like to get a storyline.'
So not bad at all. If Eddie wasn't so annoying, would be even better.
Two; Mitch has an upcoming test. He's stressed out about it.
Three: Trevor dates the boss's daughter. Which leads to him learning a lesson.
Eddie once again thinks if he tells nobody anything a problem will go away. And again he gets no sympathy as a character from me. This goes to a set piece resolution and as a plotline is ok.
The Mitch one does have quite a good pay off. Which may make you smile.
The Trevor one is really good. Solid drama that you can learn from. You do want him to say 'see Jill? That's what it's like to get a storyline.'
So not bad at all. If Eddie wasn't so annoying, would be even better.
