Before I Go one about this, I just want to state that things are gonna get weird in this pilot so keep your Butts on the chair.
So this is an Interesting one, A Yeti...... Hold on a second their, Yeti, this is clearly a Bigfoot, It's obvious that whoever made this
Dennis Messner
Must've known that the Yeti and The Bigfoot are related. This short is nothing special, but there are some key elements of Visual comedy like when Heichriven, a 16 year old dance with a Third Grade girl, Nice cover up of Pedophilia, it doesn't go to the extreme of making Heichriven stalk April. Though where some of the weakest points of the short fall in is the writing. Don't get me wrong, I like Family Sitcoms like The Simpsons, Oblongs, and even Family Guy at times, but at least they don't jump from one scene to another, Say like the opening, It first starts with the kids arguing about their personal space in which Og doesn't like, then It cuts to the Hairless Lady and Og Announcing that they're gonna be chaperones at the party, where did them announcing the prom come in? But there's some good times with the short, Like when Og becomes berserk, sure it jumped from Heinchriven slow dancing with April to Og getting mauled by bears, but with the reaction that Og made was phenomenal that I'd count it as a plus to the really jumpy short. I mean to be Honest, The concept is great, It's what happens when Spot from Teacher's Pet accomplishes his dreams of becoming a human boy, except fro Og, it was easy, except for his Lower Self Control that made sense in a way, and the animation has an Olive the Other Reindeer feeling to it, according to the art style if you add outlines, It is the Dennis Messner Art Style we barely know today, yet some scenes like the Car crash scene were jumping endlessly, it had some good moments, but not enough to be remarkable. Would I see it as a Disney Channel Original, The answer is
Yes, you're not reading this wrong, but Yes.
Despite all the Jumping of the writing, it could work as it's own series, I mean, a family of X Y chromosome kids could work, and struggling with Instincts is a creative Idea in my book, Though it needs to be rewritten with no jumps in the story. Now I'm out to capture Bigfoot
So this is an Interesting one, A Yeti...... Hold on a second their, Yeti, this is clearly a Bigfoot, It's obvious that whoever made this
Dennis Messner
Must've known that the Yeti and The Bigfoot are related. This short is nothing special, but there are some key elements of Visual comedy like when Heichriven, a 16 year old dance with a Third Grade girl, Nice cover up of Pedophilia, it doesn't go to the extreme of making Heichriven stalk April. Though where some of the weakest points of the short fall in is the writing. Don't get me wrong, I like Family Sitcoms like The Simpsons, Oblongs, and even Family Guy at times, but at least they don't jump from one scene to another, Say like the opening, It first starts with the kids arguing about their personal space in which Og doesn't like, then It cuts to the Hairless Lady and Og Announcing that they're gonna be chaperones at the party, where did them announcing the prom come in? But there's some good times with the short, Like when Og becomes berserk, sure it jumped from Heinchriven slow dancing with April to Og getting mauled by bears, but with the reaction that Og made was phenomenal that I'd count it as a plus to the really jumpy short. I mean to be Honest, The concept is great, It's what happens when Spot from Teacher's Pet accomplishes his dreams of becoming a human boy, except fro Og, it was easy, except for his Lower Self Control that made sense in a way, and the animation has an Olive the Other Reindeer feeling to it, according to the art style if you add outlines, It is the Dennis Messner Art Style we barely know today, yet some scenes like the Car crash scene were jumping endlessly, it had some good moments, but not enough to be remarkable. Would I see it as a Disney Channel Original, The answer is
Yes, you're not reading this wrong, but Yes.
Despite all the Jumping of the writing, it could work as it's own series, I mean, a family of X Y chromosome kids could work, and struggling with Instincts is a creative Idea in my book, Though it needs to be rewritten with no jumps in the story. Now I'm out to capture Bigfoot