first of all, I liked the story. The idea was clever and I liked the building of the other characters' stories to the main one and then coming back full circle. I also liked the idea of the workers in the coffee shop overseeing the customers with witty comments. I know there is a limit to production value on a small(if any) budget, but the need more variation of shots is important regardless of budget. And if there is any moment that a camera error or audio error occurs, and is left in the final edit...it shouts "mistake" and takes away credibility. I did like the casting of the main woman who was broken up with. I thought she was a very natural actress, but I wish I had an opportunity to care about the main characters a little more.