I loved it, however I have a few words.
1. Bike Scene: - Audio issues, I think it can be easily fixed if they have money in the budget to do so.
2. Audition Scene: - Judges aren't that cruel in reality. However, being that it's already established, I think that the Judge's cruelty should contribute to Erin's shyness.
3. Emily's Mom: -It can be offensive to some people if the usage of religion acts as a punishment. Religion shouldn't be made out to look like a punishment.
4. Kim Barnard *: - I know she is an actress and hasn't been shown yet but, she is a very awesome person and she should be more involved. Understandably if it doesn't conflict with the plot.
In Summary: Aside from these things, I enjoyed it very much. I am very interested to see the development of the characters.
1. Bike Scene: - Audio issues, I think it can be easily fixed if they have money in the budget to do so.
2. Audition Scene: - Judges aren't that cruel in reality. However, being that it's already established, I think that the Judge's cruelty should contribute to Erin's shyness.
3. Emily's Mom: -It can be offensive to some people if the usage of religion acts as a punishment. Religion shouldn't be made out to look like a punishment.
4. Kim Barnard *: - I know she is an actress and hasn't been shown yet but, she is a very awesome person and she should be more involved. Understandably if it doesn't conflict with the plot.
In Summary: Aside from these things, I enjoyed it very much. I am very interested to see the development of the characters.