I'm not gonna lie, the show from the beginning was good. It had suspense, drama and a lot of interesting stuff to keep you going but instead ending at 126 episodes, it could've ended at 116. The final 10 chapters weren't needed cuz it was full of repeated and unnecessary stuff.
There are better ways things could've gone, but some of the characters chose to make absurd and unrealistic choices. Carlos for example, could've immediately called the police when he followed Fernanda to Luis' hideout, but no, he didn't do that. Instead he chose to engage in a fight he was never going to win, giving Luis another chance to escape. If Carlos had simply called the police, the show would've ended right there and that's it. Another thing that wasn't needed was that car chase between Luis and Pedro. It was obvious from the beginning that they would exchange blows, so why the need to chase Luis when he (Pedro) could've fought Luis at that place. *Sighs* Another thing was Fernanda's decision to return to Luis after they'd escaped was actually pretty stupid, if you ask me. Luis only wanted the young boy, Predrito. So why did Fernanda leave him to go and face Luis alone? I understand that it was out of motherly love, but it just doesn't make sense. Last of all were those annoying flashbacks. We've seen Fernanda grow up and watched her play her violin several times so there's no need to show flashbacks of her playing again. That was basically what her story was about. There are a lot more problems but I'm just gonna end here.
It's obvious the writers and producers were just trying to prolong the story which, isn't right. I hope they take some of the things I've said into consideration about their new telenovela.
There are better ways things could've gone, but some of the characters chose to make absurd and unrealistic choices. Carlos for example, could've immediately called the police when he followed Fernanda to Luis' hideout, but no, he didn't do that. Instead he chose to engage in a fight he was never going to win, giving Luis another chance to escape. If Carlos had simply called the police, the show would've ended right there and that's it. Another thing that wasn't needed was that car chase between Luis and Pedro. It was obvious from the beginning that they would exchange blows, so why the need to chase Luis when he (Pedro) could've fought Luis at that place. *Sighs* Another thing was Fernanda's decision to return to Luis after they'd escaped was actually pretty stupid, if you ask me. Luis only wanted the young boy, Predrito. So why did Fernanda leave him to go and face Luis alone? I understand that it was out of motherly love, but it just doesn't make sense. Last of all were those annoying flashbacks. We've seen Fernanda grow up and watched her play her violin several times so there's no need to show flashbacks of her playing again. That was basically what her story was about. There are a lot more problems but I'm just gonna end here.
It's obvious the writers and producers were just trying to prolong the story which, isn't right. I hope they take some of the things I've said into consideration about their new telenovela.